Sunday, August 26, 2007

Red

Look!
You can no longer delude!
Look down to this world
This pit you have brewed

Are you blind?
The fanciful glade?
That foul facade?
Face the fester you've made!

But no, turn away
Like your hypocrite kin
There is no decay
This is not your sin

Imbecile!
If we wish to this world renew
It must start with one
It must start with you!

3 comments:

Syrma said...

To convey such things and still make it flow and rhyme...just wow :D

Anonymous said...

I taste a hint of slam poetry.

Anonymous said...

it was powerful, this is a slam poetry type of thing.