Saturday, July 5, 2008

On indecision

Fear not the road not taken!
Dread not the uncertain trail
Inside a veridical you lies
The former, frostbitten, dies.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like it. And the Frost imagery. :)

Line 3 kinda disrupts the flow, but it still works.

Glad to see you writing again. :)

Syrma said...

I feel like this is something you'd see on those motivational posters with pretty pictures as a background.

Which is a good thing, I guess :]

x said...

I like it.
I'm not a poet, so I really can't say much else.
Thank you for your comments on my blog.